As I lie on my bed
a single thought runs through my mind
Something she once asked me
which went unanswered
'Have I changed'?
"No you have not,
probably,you have"
Do I know?
Did I ever know?
Consumed by this thought,
I fell asleep.
Now I wait for her,
thinking deep.
Who do you think of,in our hour long conversation?
Why is there so much consternation.
What story are you going to concoct next?
Chicanery is what I expect.
Am I being lured into some bloody bait;
Or is it a part of the game,
This forlorn wait.
When I have my answers,
I shall move forth
Only into darkness,into wilderness
into further loneliness.
Then I hear your footsteps,prancing towards me
Elated I am,now happy and glee
As you move close,I study that spasm on your face
I observe those breasts,rising and falling
now loosing pace.
I flung open my arms to get my due,
With all your might,you stab with your Kris(pronounced as crease)
And I only smile,not even plead.
Incessant attacks follow,with growing exuberance
After she's done with;
Slowly I crawl.
That dagger was a waste,
They were only little pricking,like by an awl.
Yes,I sensed it when she was near,
Although I pretended,I do not fear
the end;which came
and I did not hear.
With an eye barely open,I gaze at her
She's now with him.
I only smirk
She has met her end;so have I
And there's nothing more to say,
Just the final goodbye.
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4 comments:
come on yaar,help me out who r u talking about.........aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh..
do tel me al d details when u hav time(mail) or balance(phone).
anyways d poem rocks man.........keep going.......best wishes.....
Hey bro,good one yaar...i knw who it is for,but do u think two parallel lines can ever meet...bhool jaa...
See poetry, is comparison, so u don't burp it out directly. eg:"With all your might,you stab with your kris", can be written as " With all your might,you push those filthy nails right through my veins", or something like dat, also ,something dat brings justice to ur feelings (of disgust n frustration , here).
Also refrain from using big words like consternation.
Very beautifully written, I particularly enjoyed the boldness and frankness.
Go on. The start waz a little shaky, but it improved with every single verse
hey bro... what have u done ? why did u changed the opening of the poem ,and whythe hell have u posted it under ur name.............................................................just kidding . good job yaar keep it up
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