Wednesday, February 6, 2008

15 Minuites And 1 Second

Silence is what we talk amidst,
And then silence prevails.
This silence is what i want to feel,
Unattended wounds that her touch can heal.
Words follow, but miserably fail
And in my coffin i sense the final nail.
I struggle for thoughts,for words,for movements
While the other end lies unperturbed.
Silence fills the gap between my pain
It's been long,i've been longing in vain
Are you the same i once knew
Or an imposter in this world of self
Inactivity takes over, and my answer remains due.
Amused at such rigidity of heart
Solitary i suffocate and smart
Break 'o' break open these shackles-I confront
Yet she remains completely inert.
What follows then is silence
Silence prevails.................

5 comments:

chetna said...

hey dat is so cool man.........so heart touching.........was it written by????????

Unknown said...

very nice composition.........
future poet maann!!!!!!!!!!!!

Unknown said...

wEll composed, but one can sense that u r striving for maintaining da flow of rhyming words. Go full hearted at it, if u plan to do so, else dont even think about it. The basic point is stop striving.
newayz, I more dan appreciate it.

Unknown said...

hey cool yaar.....well composed....good yaar

Anonymous said...

Hey buddy... It is so coolllllll

You don't know me and I don't know you.. but we did roam in the same place.. yup you're right------ AHLCON.. I've come to know about your blog from my friend, Rohit Sud's scrapbook..

Your work is too awesome..

Someone commented that you are striving to maintain rhyming flow..

Don't listen to such people.. I know the one who said like that hates to appreciate U..

I know those words came from your heart..

Go on dost...... May GOD bless you to become the future Robert Frost